Sunday, December 22, 2013

Gift: Haiku

her eyes
wishing from a distance, for his
smile, and her gift


This prompt was taken from: Haiku Heights #314 - Gifts

Special thanks to Mr. Amrit Sinha for teaching me how to write a Haiku. This is my first Haiku and it wouldn't have been possible without his help.



24 comments:

  1. A good first attempt ... waiting to read more from you now :-)

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  2. Brilliant start.. Keep on writing.

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  3. A good start Ayushee.. And let me warn you.. Haiku is addictive.. Speaking from experience ;)

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  4. A very good maiden attempt. Keep writing.

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  5. Nice start :)

    keep blogging :)
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  6. For a first timer it's too good :)

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  7. It's an inspirational first go, well done.

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