Sunday, March 16, 2014

Return (Haiku)

unreturned, unspoken
wedding gift, forced smile
hades on earth, anyone?

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19 comments:

  1. Sometimes one just can;t help but view such gifts as one of many. Not given much thought, very ordinary! Nicely Ayushi!

    Hank

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    Daniel.

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    1. Would love to know more about it, Daniel. Kindly send in a mail

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  3. Unspoken, as in vows unspoken? Unreturned as in love? Or just an ordinary gift? Nice! Just mbiguous enough to keep me thinking.

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    1. I intended to keep it ambiguos, Karen. Can be interpreted in a lot of ways. One is definitely the way you interpreted it. And another can be from a third persons point of view. A person is attending the wedding of his beloved. Giving her a forced smile and seeing her with another man. What is killing him more is that his love was never returned and never spoken. So hell on earth!

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  4. Thanks for offering me "Hell on Earth." but I will pass! Fine poem!

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  5. very poetic ,Ayushee ! love this one !

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  6. This is sublime ... very well expressed :-)

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  7. I received a few wedding gifts that I had to come up with some "creative thank yous" for.

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  8. Very nice and a bit funny to me as well. Wedding gifts!

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    1. Funny? Haha. Okay.
      Thanks for dropping by, Alice :)

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  9. Silence can be torturous yet sometimes silence is comforting.

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