her eyes
wishing from a distance, for his
smile, and her gift
This prompt was taken from: Haiku Heights #314 - Gifts
Special thanks to Mr. Amrit Sinha for teaching me how to write a Haiku. This is my first Haiku and it wouldn't have been possible without his help.
A good first attempt ... waiting to read more from you now :-)
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DeleteA good start Ayushee.. And let me warn you.. Haiku is addictive.. Speaking from experience ;)
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Thanks Karanvir :)
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DeleteIt's an inspirational first go, well done.
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